Music Video Draft

This is my music video draft for Alex Goot's cover of The Lazy Song.
There are a few problems with this video that i need to correct when it comes to filming my final video. Such as the lighting in some of the shots are extremely dark and causes noise within the video. Also some of the shots are out of sync with the music and a couple of shots, such as the shot of the toy Wall-e are way too long.
Of course there's also the problem that i didn't manage to record every shot i needed so the video is about 2 minutes shorter than it should be.
Because i wanted this video to look as good as possible, i have deliberately recorded in 1080p HD so everything appears clear and sharp in the video. Because of this, i'm having to use a friends mac to edit it, which is difficult as i have little to no experience with Mac's.
I have used a video throughout the entire video called Hard Light, which increases the saturation of the video making colours appear more vibrant. I've done this because i want this video to seem fun and cheerful, which was difficult since it was grey and raining outside.
This video will also be going up on to Facebook and Twitter so that i can get feedback, not only from other students in my class, but also other people who do not take media, and see their views on it as well.